Award-Winning Storyteller

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Award-winning storyteller

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Making YOU Googlicious & unforgettable

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Not Just Feedback. Firepower.

Lukewarm award entries don’t win.

Award writing is equal parts treasure hunt, an audit and a test of your emotional stamina.

You’re digging for gold in places you forgot existed… while simultaneously sorting your digital junk drawer… all while gently convincing yourself that you do in fact have achievements worth bragging about. It’s part archaeology, part detective work, part therapy.

Then you’ve done the hard part; you done the award writing, gathered all your evidence and feeling good about your work. But before you hit submit, make sure it actually lands. Whether you need a sharp set of eyes or an expert to unpack it live, these award critique packages make sure what you’ve written nails the criteria.

Think of it as a professional polish with zero BS, maximum punch, and a whole lot of clarity.

The Win Blueprint

Write your award entry with snap and swagger

So… you’ve got 500, 800 or 2000 words to prove you’re brilliant. No pressure.

You stare at the blank page. You overthink the first sentence. You second-guess your stats. You wonder if you sound like you’re up yourself, or worse, like you’ve got nothing to say.

Meanwhile, the judges are skimming 40 entries that all start with “We are passionate about excellence.” They don’t care about these cliche statements. They want proof, personality and a story that sticks. They want to feel something.

What judges want:

  • A clear story, not a CV
  • Proof you’ve done what you claim
  • A bit of personality (yes, really)
  • Entries that don’t make them reach for caffeine
  • No BS. No buzzwords. No padding. No AI sounding beige repetition. 

The Win Blueprint is for those who are sick of guessing, waffling, or writing the same tired copy-and-paste entry that disappears into the ‘thanks but no thanks’ pile.

This is the DIY kit that helps you pull together the good stuff (the wins, data, and guts of your story), wrap it in clarity and tone, and send off something that actually sounds like you, but better.

Whether you’re:

  • A founder who doesn’t have time or that writing je ne sais quoi.
  • A VA or comms pro tasked with making it pop.
  • Fed up with award entry anxiety.

One-off payment

$150

You get:
  • The award entry skeleton
    A step-by-step structure that stops waffle before it starts. Built to help you hook, prove, and finish strong.
  • The Breadcrumb Method Guide
    Learn how to thread story, purpose, and proof like a pro.
  • Proof builder worksheet
    Drag real wins out of your head and onto the page, no dig deep journaling required.
  • Judge de-blur checklist
    10 ruthless checks to make sure your entry makes sense, and stands out.
  • Stop writing like AI tone fixer
    Real examples. Real cringe. Real fixes. Say goodbye to passionate about innovation and in the realm of the business landscape forever.
  • Examples of award-winning entries
    These aren’t fake samples. They’re real-deal winning entries, with commentary on why they worked.
  • Lifetime access + free updates
    Every time I refine the kit, you get the new version. No extra fees or expiry.
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Optional Add-on
Tone It Up: Award Entry Review

From $350

We can look over your award draft and tell you if it answers the questions, meets the criteria and sounds like you.

We can de-AI your award writing and give it that human feel, like you are talking to the judges.

Includes full edit, tone + structure scorecard, and a detailed Loom walkthrough.

There’s also a live 1:1 review option if you really want to rip the Band-Aid off – see the deep dive opt-in below.

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Tone It Up: Award Entry Critique

Award entry review with feedback

$350

You've done the award writing. Let's make sure it has all the proof, evidence and presents in a way that gets noticed by the judges. Or you've submitted and didn't win and would like feedback on how to make it better. You get:
  • A full mark-up of your draft (Google Doc with tracked edits + comments)
  • A 10–15 min Loom video walking through your entry’s strengths, gaps, and fixes
  • Scorecard on tone, structure, proof, and judge clarity
  • Light fix suggestions, not a rewrite, just real feedback from a pro.
Perfect for:
Time-poor founders, comms managers, or VAs who want a second set of expert eyes before it goes in.
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Award entry deep dive + debrief

$1,250

You don’t just want feedback, you want to level up your voice, proof, and structure on the spot. You get everything in Quickfire, plus:
  • A 30-minute 1:1 Zoom session with Annette to walk through your draft live
  • Real-time coaching on voice, proof, structure, and polish
  • One additional round of doc review after edits
  • More storytelling, more gold, more clarity and more proof that packs a punch.
Perfect for:
High-stakes entries, thought leadership awards, or teams who want expert strategy and confidence before submitting.
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